A Formal Feeling

ellipses, semi-colons and conversations in a car

15 January 2008

gone

Tried
to see you
but you
were gone tried
to find you but
you were some
place else tried
to talk to
you
but you
couldn’t hear
saw you leave
the store, ran
to tell you
about
the blueberries but
you were
someone else
Posted by nfhuth at 1:06 PM
Labels: detachment, senses, students

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